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Kolya Reshetov's avatar

did i miss the part of what her eyes looked like after she took her elvis sunglasses off ??

Mandy | Greater Ape's avatar

This felt so good to read.

lchristopher's avatar

That’s really amazing to hear @Mandy | Greater Ape. I absolutely consider my readers when writing

[gen z: this is only applicable when you have more than one fucking character, a plot, sometimes even an outline and character sketches. do these things, and we can be at peace.]

I just feel nice that these slices of my one very fractured reality are appreciated by readers like you.

I guess I wonder how it would feel good, objectively.

Mandy | Greater Ape's avatar

It’s like reading anything where you love the characters and feel like you’re in the moment with them. Feels good. 😊

Soham's avatar

I really enjoyed reading this... Very nice. I especially love this line:

i have loved her body for as many years as she has spent hating it.

It's beautiful...